Chapter 2 ahoy!

Hello once again, Ayin readers! Just here to give you the second chapter of the Sierra storyline!

Okay, so a little important things to know before you read the chapter. By the idea of a reader who commented the previous chapter, and the support of this idea by Anatoli, a major thing in the first chapter has been changed, which I will edit into that chapter sometime soon. The scientist that Sierra meets is not alive. Instead the lunatic scientist has been replaced by an audio log. We felt that it would give a better sense of dread and loneliness into the story, which is what we're aiming for. So just so you don't read the second chapter with utter confusion, this is a change we made that is now canon for the entire story. There have been a few tweaks here and there, but as I've said before, nothing I publish here is a final draft, so anything in this chapter that contradicts are probably ideas that will be rewritten to work in the future. The general rule  for this is that the latest chapter published is always canon until the next one is published, then any changes there are canon.

Okay, to the second chapter at hand. My personal opinion of this is a little less excited than the first chapter. It was harder to write than the first, particularly the ending and finding clever ways to make the experience more scary. This is my first ever horror story, so making the scary scenes genuinely scary was a challenge to me. But hopefully I managed to pull it off at least a little. It's for you to decide.

Sadly, the third chapter is a bit on hold for a while. Now that I've written the story for the first level of the game, the level design is gonna start. Don't worry, I will continue to write the story, just not in the same speed as before. I have some plans for where the story will go, I even have an idea I'm throwing around for the third chapter that I will experiment with, so hopefully it will see the light of day. Just don't hold your breath. (I hear that's not healthy.)

I'm also hugely surprised that the first chapter got so great reception. So great that I made a meme in it's honor! I'm ever so thankful!

As always, we're still in the early pre-production stage, lots of learning and idea flinging for the months ahead. We'll update more when we have something that we can show you all, so until then, you'll have to live with my amateur writing.

Also, we have a new member of the group who should be acknowledged. We recruited Oscar's friend and fellow band member Pontus who is gonna write the music for our game! He's given us a little preview of what he can do for us, and so far we're very pleased with what he's shown.

Anyways, link to the chapter here! Hope you enjoy it!



Magnus out!

First chapter done!

The first draft of the first chapter is done. Link can be found below. I managed to write up to a little over five pages. The writing is a bit compressed, but the general thread of events is there, so we have a somewhat clear picture of what we're aiming for. This is in no way the final writing for the first level we're doing, this is just my primary idea of the setting and the story, so anything written in the document can be changed later on, depending on reception from the rest of the group and readers of this blog. You're all very welcome to comment, any criticism and tips on how to improve is greatly appreciated!

My main quarrel with the story is how to characterize Sierra. Making the writing act her personality out or giving her hours of painful monologue seems a bit boring, so I'm trying to think of ways to put her character into the mere actions of the game. Hopefully I'll spawn some new ideas for the next chapter! But for now, enjoy my attempt at professional writing!

Link to chapter!

Magnus out!

First day!

Hi!

Welcome to Ayin Productions blog.
We consist of 5 people, Anatoli Khapougine (3-D design), Rickard Lindqvist (3-D design), Magnus Palmstierna (Story-writer and project-manager), Oscar Wennergren (Programming and logic behind blog, e-mail and updates) and Johan Sjöstrand (Programming).

This is the first day of our project, we've decided the set-up and the entire plan until week 52.
We will start off creating and designing our game starting week 24, just after we have finished school.
You guys will be able to see our personal thoughts and contributions to this in our private tabs, marked with our names. We hope to get everything up and ready to go in a couple of weeks, since we've got a lot to work with, learning C# and how to use UDK.

We will get a Paypal if you want to donate and help us to get going on this.

/ Ayin Productions

This pictures inspired this project. All credits goes to the artist.